(All descriptions of
the crime are not told in chronological order throughout the story,
but instead figured out by the readers as the detective discovers
them. He investigates both suspects and the story would provide the reader with accounts and details on both of these investigations. The reader has an idea of who committed the murder after a while, but are still unsure of how the criminal did it.)
Setting: Toronto. A basement washroom in
a doctor's office building. Entering the hallway from the stairwell, a narrow
white hallway extends 50ft. The walls are stained beige and have
multiple smudges of dirt smeared across them. The floor however, is
waxed and the tiles reflect the rectangular fluorescent lights with a
slight sheen in parts. On one end of this hallway is a janitor's
office, and on the other is a set of washrooms. The crime takes place
in the men's washroom. It's small, having only a doorknob, two
stalls, and one sink, but the walls and floors are clean and a strong
scent of Lysol seems to constantly linger in the room.
Crime: A body is found in the
basement bathroom. The victim: a private investigator with no
apparent physiological problems. There is only one small abrasion on
the subjects body, a non lethal cut along his throat. However, a
lethal does of morphine is found in his system in the autopsy report.
The perplexing part occurs when the police find the apparent criminal
stuck in an elevator, the PI's doctor, and beside him a garbage bag
containing a pile of garbage, and among it the needle and morphine
bottle as well as the incision knife used for the cut. The bag reeks
of Lysol, and is damp.
Criminal: Dr. Bishop is cunning,
ruthless and an expert involving police discretion. Running a
prescription drug trafficking system is no piece of pie, Dr. Bishop
knows that the best way to defeat a detective is to blatantly make a
mistake to sway their attention to something not as obvious. Private
investigator Smallwood was expendable. In fact, he had to go. He had
figured the drug operation out, and could prove it, meaning life in
prison for the doctor. If it wasn't for the PI's need to gloat of his
intuition for suspicion to the doctor, he might still be alive and
the operation figured out by the police.
The murder had to be committed to ensure the doctor's freedom, and
spontaneously none the less. Not only that, but the doctor had a need
to be in plain sight while hiding. Dr.Bishop chooses to test his luck and
skill in acting, by framing the office's janitor, an ex violent
patient of the psychiatric clinic attached to the back of the
building. Dr. Bishop jabs the morphine needle in forcefully and
unprofessionally when killing PI Smallwood. He steals a set of keys
and a full garbage bag from the janitor's office, and puts the murder
weapons inside. Next Dr. Bishop proceeds to prop the murder victim in
a stall to avoid being conspicuous until the right moment. He returns
to the washroom after noticing the janitor is heading to the basement
to take his break. That's when the doctor sprawls the corpse on the
bathroom floor, then proceeds to enter the elevator with his bag of
murder weapons (needle and morphine container). Halfway up the elevator, he uses the keys to stop the elevator.
Then Dr. Bishop continues to dispose of the keys by exiting the top
of the elevator and throwing them down the shaft. He has now
purposefully trapped himself with the murder weapons. When the police
arrive, the Dr. is stranded in the elevator with the murder weapons.
He is arrested on the spot. However, he pleads with rookie detective Chase and the police force that he is innocent and has been framed by the janitor who
asked the doctor to place the garbage bags with others on the way up,
then locked him inside the elevator. The criminal's talents in improvisation and lying are frightening, but fascinating, and make his ability to persuade and deceive others (including the readers) very appropriate for an antagonist in a mystery.
Detective:
Detective Chase is
a rookie, assigned to the case. The
rookie detective has just lost it all. He was injured in the field,
and now the chief of police has forced him to take the detective
position. After all, he did achieve the highest scores among the trainees, but refused the offer of the sleuth position. Detective Chase, is met with the two
suspects, the janitor and the Doctor. Both suspects claim to be
framed by the other and both do not have any apparent motive. Both pass the polygraph tests. The
janitor's psychiatric and violent history, as well as the Dr's
coincidental presence with the murder weapons of one of his patients
create conspicuous aspects to both characters. And even after the
court has dismissed the Doctor, declaring him innocent, the rookie
detective is faced with the same intuition of suspicion that killed
PI Smallwood. He investigates the janitor and doctor in more depth, despite being against the code of conduct regarding closed cases. The Detective's cunning, patient, precise and persistent
nature allow him to find clues at the scene of the crime, and in the lives of both suspects. The detective also manages to break the doctor by becoming one of his patients,
and making frequent trips to engage in mind games with him.
Detective Chase is
a rookie, assigned to the case. The
rookie detective has just lost it all. He was injured in the field,
and now the chief of police has forced him to take the detective
position. After all, he did achieve the highest scores among the trainees, but refused the offer of the sleuth position. Detective Chase, is met with the two
suspects, the janitor and the Doctor. Both suspects claim to be
framed by the other and both do not have any apparent motive. Both pass the polygraph tests. The
janitor's psychiatric and violent history, as well as the Dr's
coincidental presence with the murder weapons of one of his patients
create conspicuous aspects to both characters. And even after the
court has dismissed the Doctor, declaring him innocent, the rookie
detective is faced with the same intuition of suspicion that killed
PI Smallwood. He investigates the janitor and doctor in more depth, despite being against the code of conduct regarding closed cases. The Detective's cunning, patient, precise and persistent
nature allow him to find clues at the scene of the crime, and in the lives of both suspects. The detective also manages to break the doctor by becoming one of his patients,
and making frequent trips to engage in mind games with him.
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